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Chapter 8 - THE PERSON THEY WERE ALL AFRAID OF

Gretchen stared at the table.

“I don't know if I should say.”

I stood.

“You already crossed that line.”

She looked at Callum.

He nodded slowly.

“Tell her.”

Gretchen took a breath.

“The person financing the restructuring wasn't a bank.”

“Then who?”

“A private investor.”

“Name?”

“Martin Vale.”

The name meant nothing to me.

“What does he want?”

“The property.”

I stared at her.

“Why?”

“Because the storefront has commercial potential.”

I understood.

The detached storefront wasn't just a favor for Gretchen.

It was the most valuable part of the property.

Martin wanted the entire lot.

Gretchen had promised him access to it.

Without my permission.

“How much?”

“Three hundred thousand.”

I looked at Callum.

“You promised him my property.”

“It wasn't a sale.”

“What was it?”

“A temporary transfer.”

“There is no temporary transfer of someone else's property.”

He knew that.

That was the problem.

He knew.

I walked to the window.

The old oak tree stood exactly where it had always stood.

I remembered my grandmother telling me that the house had survived three owners before me.

She had called it stubborn.

I had laughed.

Now I understood why.

It had survived people who thought they could control it.

Maybe it would survive this too.

I turned back.

“What happens tomorrow?”

Gretchen answered.

“Martin is coming for the appraisal.”

“Here?”

“Yes.”

I looked at the clock.

It was nearly midnight.

“No.”

Callum frowned.

“What?”

“No one is entering my house tomorrow.”

Brenda looked shocked.

“But the appointment—”

“I didn't make it.”

Callum said quietly, “He'll be angry.”

I looked at him.

“I am not responsible for protecting the feelings of a man who expected to buy something that wasn't his.”

Gretchen began crying.

“I know I did wrong.”

“Then help fix it.”

She looked at me.

“How?”

“Tell the truth.”

She nodded.

Then Callum's phone buzzed.

He looked at the screen.

This time he didn't hide it.

A message appeared.

MR. VALE: IF THE OWNER DOES NOT SIGN TOMORROW, THE FAMILY LOSES EVERYTHING.

I looked at Callum.

“Everything?”

He closed his eyes.

“What does that mean?”

He sat down.

“The loan is already overdue.”

“How overdue?”

“Six months.”

I stared at him.

“You've been hiding this for six months?”

“Yes.”

“And you thought you could fix it by taking my house.”

“Yes.”

I shook my head.

Then Brenda spoke.

“There was another reason.”

I looked at her.

She walked toward the dining room cabinet.

From the bottom drawer, she removed a small envelope.

She handed it to me.

Inside was a photograph.

It showed my grandmother standing in front of the house twenty years earlier.

Beside her was a much younger Brenda.

I stared at the picture.

“Why do you have this?”

Brenda sat down.

“Your grandmother and I knew each other.”

I frowned.

“You never told me.”

“She didn't want you to know.”

“Why?”

“Because she didn't trust me.”

The room went silent.

I looked at her.

“Why?”

Brenda swallowed.

“Years ago, I asked her to sell the storefront.”

“Why?”

“Because I wanted to start a business there.”

I stared at the photograph.

“She refused.”

“She told me the property would stay in the family.”

“What does that have to do with now?”

Brenda looked at Callum.

“Everything.”

Callum lowered his head.

“Mom has believed for years that the property should have belonged to her.”

I looked at Brenda.

She didn't deny it.

“I thought your grandmother was unfair.”

“So you moved into my house.”

“I thought Callum would eventually own it.”

“And when I didn't sell?”

“You were never supposed to know how much pressure the family was under.”

I stood.

“You created pressure.”

Brenda's eyes filled.

“I know.”

It was the first time she had said it.

Not an excuse.

Not a defense.

Just an admission.

Then I noticed something behind the photograph.

A folded note.

I opened it.

It was written in my grandmother's handwriting.

Only one sentence.

If anyone ever tries to make you feel like a guest in this house, remember who taught you to turn the key.

My eyes burned.

I pressed the note against my palm.

Then Callum looked toward the front door.

A car had stopped outside.

Headlights swept across the living room wall.

Nobody moved.

Gretchen whispered, “He wasn't supposed to come tonight.”

The doorbell rang.

Once.

Then again.

Callum stood.

“Martin.”

I looked at him.

“No.”

May you like

I walked toward the door.

“This time, I answer.”

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